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Post by // KULTA on Jan 5, 2007 9:16:17 GMT -5
THIS WHOLE PLACE was
new and even though she did not want to admit it, the whole
prospect of being claimed was slightly daunting. Never before
had she been around more then one stag alone, well one that
was not of her family. She had been alone plenty of times with
her brother and father, but her mother wanted to make sure she
was chaste when she went away. Thinking about her past made
her want to make a face and scream to the world about the
unfairness of her life. Now though, she reminded herself, she
was free. Free from her controlling parents, and unfair
expectations, and a life as the mate to a warlord who she did not
even know. That life was gone and now she had control of her
life, her destiny it was all in her hands.
WITH A RATHER unladylike snort she began walking away from
the claiming lands, trying to sort out her thoughts. She had
heard of a place that was referred to as a gathering place, but
did not feel like going there. She wanted to be away from other
horses before she went to the claiming lands and was claimed,
she was not even sure she wanted to be claimed at this point.
Coming to a place where she could get her thoughts back
together, was what she aimed to do. With the heat coming
down from the sky she set off in search of someplace with
water. The delightful sound of cascading water came to her
perked auds and she picked up a graceful trot.
As THE SOUND of water crashing into water and rock became
louder she picked up her pace. When her orbs finally caught site
of the clear water she let out a happy whinny, not expecting
anyone to be within hearing distance her guard was down.
Trotting gleefully into the water, she inwardly rejoiced at all of
the flecks of water that landed on her smoky black coat. Arching
her neck and raising her tail she marched around in a circle the
spray form the waterfall and her own hoof-falls getting her wet.
When she tired of prancing around in circles like a love-struck filly
she moved to a shallower area, and gently lay down. The water
lapped calmly against her sides and she let her crown rest gently
on her forelegs.
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Post by Azideln;;Razzle on Jan 5, 2007 19:17:48 GMT -5
Far away in the distance the mahogany frame moved slowly over the lush emeralds, munching quietly. Snort emitted from his nares as he lifted his dial, shaking it freely, he lowered it once again and kept munching.
Sunbeams hit the earth with force, small patches of sweat were slowly forming over the masculine's muscled frame. Deep in through of how happy he was that he was able to live in such a elegant place and love such a stunning, kind and loving beauty. He smiled as he thought about it, he was so lucky.
Suddenly, Dial lifted, towers lifted and pricked. Underneath his pistons he heard movement. Orbs searched as his nares breathed in, looking for the scent of the movement.
Catching it, he picked a canter toward it. Pistons carried his frame over the hills, across the open ranges. Pistons lifted as he flew over a fallen log, holding his dial high. Chocolate orbs searching as he moved onward.
Towers pricked as he listened, tassel lifted, streaming out behind him like a ribbon. Snort emitted from his nares. Reaching yet another hill, he came to a hault. The hill was the only hill in the lands that over looked the terrain.
Crest heaved as he tried to decrease his breaths. Sweat formed over his pelt, which did not help with the heat from the sun within the skies. But he did not care, these were his lands now. Passed down from his father, just as his father had passed down from his father.
Dial tilted to one side, this unknown stranger was a femmora. Chocolate orbs watched her a moment or two. Watching her signs, her movements. Listening to her cheerful call. He watched her quietly, she moved through Sparkling Waterfall and toward the elegant falls.
Dial straightened, he needed to figure out what she wanted. She may be a femmora but still she was a stranger. He did not know if she could be harmful to his herd. She did not look like it from a distance, but you never know. He had trusted his father at a young age and what happened? He vanished.
Snort emitted from his nares as he rose his dial. Content with himself yet strong as a King. Pistons picked up a trot down toward the femmora.
Haulting before her, but a small distance away. In order not to scare her, but in order for her to notice he was there. Kissers departed, emitting from deep in his throat, he nickered.
Dial tilted, his onyx threads falling over his interested chocolate orbs. A small smile formed over his sleek kissers, he wanted to show her he was not mean but a kind masculine. A kind King.
Towers lifted and pricked, clearing his throat, he spoke in deep lyrics. But clearly of course.
Good'Day M'Lady, May I ask how I can help you? [/left][/sup] |
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Post by // KULTA on Jan 5, 2007 21:41:27 GMT -5
THE SOUNDS OF hoof beats approaching alerted the smoky mare
to the approach of another. Rushing to her feet water cascaded
off of her sides, and she turned to study the nearing stag.
Surprised mocha orbs watched as he stopped a ways off, trying
not to intimidate her it seemed. This small act of kindness she
was happy to see, it set her more at ease. Auds turned towards
him catching the lyrics he emitted from his kissers. When he was
done speaking she replied dipping her crown deeply and bowing
with her whole body, her hooves stretched before her and her
back slopping towards the ground. When she returned to as
standing position she made sure to keep her crown down and
replied making sure she did not make eye contact, ”M’lord
forgive me for my trespass for I did not know that this land was
inhabited, my name is Jasna.”
EVEN THOUGH HER crown was pointed downwards and her body
language showed a submissive mare, her mocha orbs were not
apt to linger on the ground like she had been taught. If she was
at home she would have been scolded for sneaking glances
upwards, but she was not which is why she dared sneak
glances. The stallion seemed kind and from his approach she
doubted he would strike her for sneaking a glance. Something
about him told her that he would not strike her, but even so she
had been hit to many times by her mother and father for such
behavior that it would not be easy for her to break out of that
mold.
TWITCHING HER TAIL left and right she managed to whisk some
flies off of her wet pelt. The tiny creatures always found a way
to irritate her to no end. While she loved the warmth of summer,
the pests that came with it she had wished a thousand painful
deaths on them before but it had never happened. All around
her she could see the occasional tilt of a weary plant as the sun
snapped all of the moisture from its green leaves, turning it
brown and dry. How she silently wished for the fresh growth of
spring to come back.
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Post by Azideln;;Razzle on Jan 5, 2007 22:42:45 GMT -5
Dial tilted to one side, listening to the femmora's soft lyrics. Tilting to the side, he looked upon her. She was different from the other femmora's he had met in his life, many femmora's were either perky and hyper or they were harsh and venumious.
Snort emitted from his nares as a pest tried to slip it's way up his velvet, dial shook back and forth, onyx threads flying from side to side before falling once more over his chocolate orbs. Smile formed over his kissers once she had finished. Her calling was Jasna, very pretty and equine he thought to himself.
Dial nodded in understandment. Towers flickered back and forth a moment, listening to the sounds around him, listening for danger. He did not want harm to come to the femmora nor himself. Hearing none, he turned his attention back to the femmora. Kissers departed as he spoke.
It is Alright, Lady Jasna
He said simply. He could tell she was not a threat, and his frame relaxed. He still wandered what she was doing here though. Dial tilted, wishing to ask but knew it would be rude. Tassel lifted swishing from side to side lazily.
Sunbeams peeked through the tree's branches, as if spying upon the femmora and himself. As if they were two youngsters kissing or something. He smiled, shaking his dial back and forth. Relaxing one daggers upon the soft sod, he rested contently.
Kissers departed as he spoke.
I do not mean to be rude, Lady Jasna, but may I ask what I can do for you?
Pause.
Are you in search for a home?
He questioned quietly, he silenced himself. Awaiting her responce patiently. [/left][/sup] |
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Post by // KULTA on Jan 8, 2007 13:52:15 GMT -5
GLAD AND FEELING relieved that he was not upset over her
trespass she let her muscles relax. Watching his body language
she could tell that he was relaxed as well. Even so she did not
move the position of her crown keeping it low, just as she had
been taught. With this being a new place she did not know the
customs and even though she wanted to break free of her old
habits she was afraid that they might be common place here as
well. Auds were turned back to him as he spoke again,
pondering his question, she could not help but think that there
was nothing he could do for her. All she had wanted was to be
away from the stallions in the claiming lands and to have a
chance to think, to clear her brain. The start of her reply, more
the opening of her maw was cut short as he continued.
WAITING FOR A break in the flow of questions for the stag, she
thought about his last question. Now that the break in the
conversation had come she was rather tongue-tied as to what to
say. Knowing that he expected an answer she let her reply flow
easily from her mouth, ”I was planning on going to the
claiming grounds latter today, but when I got near to the
grounds I was afraid.” A voice in the back of her head asked,
Why are you telling him this? He has not even told you his
name! Yet, even with that voice in the back of her head
screaming protest she continued, ”I had never been around
so many stags alone, so I left and came here to relax and try to
catch my bearings once again.” With that she paused
wondering if there was anything else she should say, when
nothing came to mind she paused waiting for a reply.
BEFORE THE PAUSE could stretch to long she had opened her
mouth once again speaking, ”Are you king of these lands,
m’lord?” When he had come upon her he had asked her
questions and she had not thought of asking him questions in
return. Then remembering that he had asked if she was in
search of a home she added, ”Yes, I am in search of a
home.” All of her words seemed to be coming out rushed and
it seemed as if her feathers had been suddenly ruffled by the
appearance of the stag before her. All she had wanted when
she came here was a quiet afternoon life, she decided, was
having fun throwing curveballs at her.
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Post by Azideln;;Razzle on Jan 8, 2007 19:00:54 GMT -5
(Sentamental... happy tears... Jasna, found by Azideln... xD)
Within the aqua skies, a monarch butterfly fluttered passed the brujo. Warm smile formed over his kissers as he watched it a moment, before turning his attention back to the femmora before him. Soft nicker emitted effortlessly toward her.
Tilting his dial, he listened to her lyrics flow. Even if she emitted quiet a bit of sentences, which their was no problem. He loved listening to her sweet melody, it soothed him in a way. Towers lifted and pricked and he kept his silence. Just enjoying her words.
Nodding gently, every now and then. Chocolate orbs searching her's, his smile growing more and more as she spoke. A light breeze floated over the lands, catching the lush emberalds and allowing them to dance. Tickling his pistons, forcing him to raise them as he began to prance effortlessly.
Haulting after a few moments, still he was listening. For he would never be rude to a femmora, he knew better. It shamed him for all the other brujo's that spoke horribely to their loved ones. Life was short, you can't take it for granted.
Once she had finished, he nodded gently. Once more, a soft nicker emitted from his kissers. Pistons stepped toward Jasna, lowering his dial, his velvet touching her's. He rose her dial up from her low postion, kissers departed as his kind lyrics emitted soft and deep.
Jasna, their is no need to bow to me
He spoke to her, pausing a moment. He searched her orbs, his shining with happiness. He added quickly, yet contently.
If you would like to stay here with me... in Sparkling Waterfall you may. [/left][/sup] |
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Post by // KULTA on Jan 10, 2007 19:57:23 GMT -5
[[Not the best. Sorry]]
The touch of his muzzle to her own velvet muzzle was
surprising. Yet, at the same time it was like that last piece in a
puzzle, the piece where everything finally slid into place. The
soft touch sent a shiver of electricity racing down her spine, and
she finally really looked at Azideln. Instead of studying him like
she would any stallion, she really looked at him for the stallion he
was. Not as, just another stallion, she noted the small ribbon of
white that had been painted on his face. She took in every part
of him right down to the four white socks that marred his dark
bay body. It was almost as if she was looking at another
creature, where as before she had viewed him as another
creature to deal out punishments. Another stallion who
expected her to bow before him, that small touch of compassion
sure had gone a long way in Azideln’s favor.
When he spoke next, she watched him from a new vantage
point. Her crown held at a normal height, not regally for to do so
what have been too radical of a change, but it was held at a
position that was easy for her to keep. Before he had spoken
doubts had raced through her crown taking root and she
wondered if he would ask her to leave, but he had asked her to
say. It seemed as if the world could not get better and her body
was bubbling with excitement. The joy could not help but
overflow into her words and expression, ”Oh yes, I would love
to stay here!” Pausing a moment she continued her
expression bright, ’But could you please tell me your
blessing?” It was an intrusive comment on his privacy and
she hoped and doubted he would object to answering it.
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Post by Azideln;;Razzle on Jan 10, 2007 23:10:55 GMT -5
(Actually, I loved that post.. It was good.)
Sunbeams shone down from the aqua skies, touching the stained mahogany brujo's pelt. Warming his insides slightly, Jasna warming it more. Warming the inside of his heart, he had never felt this way before. Was this possibly the true love all spoke of? He wondered to himself. Chocolate orbs looked upon Jasna gently, towers lifted and pricked. She was speaking.
Listening intently, his smile.. so warm and content curved up upon his kissers. His gaze was warm and elated at her wonderful news. Dial tossed high as his onyx threads danced over his orbs. He looked upon her, emitting from deep within his throat latch emitted a soft nicker.
He was so elated to know she would stay with him. He knew she would love it here, as Azideln had. Towers flickered, she was not finished. He listened, a question she spoke. His name.. she asked. He forgot to tell her what it was, how silly of him.
Dial shook from side to side, as he emitted his lyrics from his kissers.
I am sorry, I forgot to tell you my name.
Pause. Clearing his throat, he spoke his calling.
I am Azideln, King of these lands [/left][/sup] |
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Post by // KULTA on Jan 14, 2007 12:10:30 GMT -5
A SOFT SMILE alighted on her lips as he spoke his name and
apologies. Azideln. It was a rather exotic name, but truly who
was she to think a name was exotic when her own name was
Jasna. Speaking softly as was her custom she said, ”Azideln,
what a noble name.” For it was, it was exotic and noble and
in her mind a very fitting name for the mocha hued stag before
her. This stag she could not help but think must be her true love,
the stag she was destined to stay with. These beautiful lands
she could not help but hope would be her home until she died.
All around her she could here sweet birdsongs and the happy
chatterings of squirrels. The swaying of the trees in a gentle
breeze and the leaves as they brushed against each other in
that same breeze.
TURNING TO AZIDELN she asked another question, ”Would
you mind showing me more of these lands?” These lands
that she had already seen some of were so far beautiful and she
did not doubt that there were even nicer spots in this terra.
[[Museles very sorry.]] |
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Post by Azideln;;Razzle on Jan 14, 2007 12:51:28 GMT -5
(It's alright.. so is mine.. a little bit anyways)
Towers lifted and pricked, as he listened to her compliment. Smiling, he tucked his dial into his crest. Tilting it to one side slightly, he straightened it after a moment or so. Kissers departed.
Thank you, Lady Jasna
Pause.
Your calling Jasna, is very strong and beautiful
Stained mahagony brujo smiled simply, a soft nicker emitted from his kissers. A light breeze floated across the lands, playing with the lush green grasses beneath him. Pistons instantly pranced, tossing his dial as his onyx threads moved with his own body movements. Falling over his kind and gentle chocolate orbs.
Excitment filled his insides as she asked to see the rest of the lands. He nodded gently, kissers departed.
I would love to show you around, Sparkling Waterfall
He said to her, a smile curving upon his kissers. Tossing his dial playfully, he snorted softly. Nares flaring as he took in the scents around him, pistons carried him in a large yet comfortable circle around Jasna. Velvet nudged her gently, as he tossed his dial to the left side, toward the waterfall.
Pistons soon picked up a prance over the soft earth, a nicker emitted from his kissers. As he spoke. His towers lifted and pricked, today was a lovely day and he wanted to share it with Jasna.
Follow me, we will start to the left [/left][/sup] |
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Post by // KULTA on Jan 14, 2007 13:19:58 GMT -5
AUDS TURNED TOWARDS Azideln as he spoke catching every
syllable that he spoke in their interior and sending them to her
brain. Speaking kindly she said, ”Lord Azideln, you do not
need to call me Lady. Just Jasna will do.” Stepping up the
shore her hooves made soft sounds as they hit the loam
beneath her, the ground was soft though and the sound was
easily absorbed. Emerald blades though were bent underneath
her weight but as soon as her weight was lifted from them they
went back to a position close to their original one. With a prance
in her step she drew close to Azideln letting herself fall into his
pace, so that they could move along together, in harmony.
WATCHING HIM PRANCE in circles around her Jasna watched his
movements noting how they showed an assured stallion.
Someone who knew that he was where he was meant to be and
did not expect a challenge or a usurper to come and take what
was rightfully his. She loved that though, while some might say
he was conceited for acting so, she did not think so. To him it
meant that he had esteem in his self and was not willing to give
up easily. Whinnying happily at him she rejoiced in how carefree
she finally felt.
WHEN HE SPOKE the name of the place that she ruled she could
not help but think it was a perfect fit for such a beautiful place.
For the waterfalls here did seem to sparkle, following him off to
the left she began to take in the scenery.
[[Sorry for the rather adrupt ending. My muse just stopped there. haha]] |
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Post by Azideln;;Razzle on Jan 14, 2007 19:17:45 GMT -5
(No worries, I think it ended wonderfully.. because when I do that it sounds strange.. because when I start sometimes I can stop. lol)
A warm smile curved over his sleek kissers, as he listened to her melody. Nodding gently in retort, he spoke.
I understand Jasna... M'Love
He said to her. He was raised a gentleman, so it was strange not to entitle a equine with something such as that. So, instead he spoke for his love. Which she was, M'Love, he whispered. He thought about it a moment, he felt different when he spoke to her or said M'Love to her. It was like true love, he thought.
Soft nicker emitted from his kissers as he looked upon her in silence a moment. Noticing her follow him, he kept in step with her as well. Moving his way to the left, toward the magnifacent falls.
Sunbeams hit the falls, making their colors as if a rainbow inside shine. In the distance it was preety but as they grew closer and closer, the colors grew larger and larger. Beaming and sparkling with effortless freedom.
(Srry, kind of boring post really...) [/left][/sup] |
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Post by // KULTA on Jan 15, 2007 22:51:15 GMT -5
[[DAMMIT! I have to do science fair. and Geometry. and English. If I have time I'll do it tomorrow.]]
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Post by Azideln;;Razzle on Jan 16, 2007 20:32:43 GMT -5
(It's alright. Take your time, I'm going insane for some reason as well. I'm like in a rage so all my posts I post tonight are horrible bc Im upset. So dont worry about it. )
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Post by // KULTA on Jan 19, 2007 1:21:56 GMT -5
Gah, I have some posts for anothe site that have more priority then this b/c the people there have been waiting for like a week. xD. But I'll get to this tomorrow. Friday, which is technically toady but whatev.
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